~ Forgive My Absence! ~ Comments

'Your Excellency Surrogate me in brilliancy' ~ Since your Checkmate we're lovingly surrogating you and will be doing for your myriad mind-set in poetry Thanks for sharing

I forgive your absence I myself am always absent following my dream...dancing...now what was that guys name that said 'Absence makes the heart grow fonder we alls luv you...regards

being a learner in the art of poetry, i 'd like to say a few things: thanks for helping the reader by adding glossary; if poetry is the universal language of every heart, it should be understood as well; secondly, there's a blend of the natural flow with the artistry of rhyming into couplet-form; thirdly it shook my confidence a little, because before this experience of reading your work, i never read a poem twice for comprehending it...i welcome it as a phase of new learning...thx a lot...

A wonderful piece from a gifted poet that I had wondered when she would return as a pieces delight. Your enjoyment with touching upon new words and descriptions are exciting as always. Very melodic piece, which conveys much that requires additional reading.

Orphic: Beyond ordinary understanding thats all i can say.....amazing

hi nivedita it a was a pleasure read.... i rejoiced reading i t :)

Very Poetic Come Back! We're missing you Ms. Niv...you need no surrogate I suppose.. 'Play your capriccio cadence In orphic esoteric effulgence.'...Out in out humbleness... readers' are Poets' propelling force..enjoyed much..tenner dr. spc

[I'll bloom n' blossom in elegance.] excellent.....top marks! ! !

Hello Nivedita...you have asked for my opinion on your poem, so I will give it honestly, please take it as constructive criticism. Any time that you must add a glossary to your poem, then, surely, it means you are trying too hard to use words that you, yourself, have not mastered. Good poetry should be so effortless and clear, that no explanations should be necessary. Next time, paint the picture with your own words, so that all the world will understand the strength and depth of your emotions without the need of a glossary or dictionary. God Bless and keep trying....you have the heart and soul of a poet.