Wednesday, December 28, 2011

Forgive Me Rose Comments

Rating: 3.5

It was a foggy fullmoon night,
behind the shadows of church light,
a Rose with a cut finger
shed her petals in my grave without a linger.
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Shihabudheen K J
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Sarojini Pattayat 24 February 2013

your choice of proper word added to the feelings of poem really touches the heart.

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Darkangel Flyfree 27 May 2012

Very well written and creative. You use your words well. so sweet and beautiful. Loved it! !

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Shahzia Batool 20 May 2012

A beautiful, figurative, narrative piece on your credit....

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Neela Nath Das 11 May 2012

A serene love picture, though mistaken for a friend in faithThe tune of everlasting belief in love, reunion after death all these mingled to say nothing ends! Superb!

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Kellsey Hartmann 30 April 2012

good poem! It was full of visual imageries and lots of emotion, very moving. I really enjoyed this poem, but why is it written twice?

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Neetha Sasidharan 21 January 2012

i'm waiting for u in d heaven wow.. nice sentence.. dis is realll

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Bella Hernandez 04 January 2012

what a gorgeous poem! ! ! every line flows into one another truely anyone who sees this poem can see the love that was written in ~Bella

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Vipins Puthooran 30 December 2011

it's a wonderful poem, , a g'd flow of beautiful passions throu'out th' poem! 10++

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Alicia Meyers 28 December 2011

Really well written poem. I love it(:

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