Forgive Me O, Friend Comments

: ~) Mrs. HoltLess than a minute ago I love this poem, great job Comment 0 great work!

Migdalia Burgoin3 minutes ago so many of life's problems come from how we are raised and our environment. Comment 0 As usual beautifully done.

Geslany As Ging Alburo Duncan14 minutes ago Keep it up and don; t forget to check mine and find the best in your judgement.ehhehehe Comment 0 I like it

Riley Barker12 minutes ago You're able to really form the sentences into whatever you want them to be by how great you use the words. sounds good with great content. Comment 0 Comment on Riley Barker's review

Every bad way has an ill outcome. If a child has the proper environment and indulge good company, he has a better chance at life, and can learn the meaning of true forgiveness and love. Thanks.

The comparisons are bold and vivid like you were taken to smoking. The tao, the climax; the first quatrain is captivating; the outcome in the last lines woven complete. Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed day! / Wow! you have lots of poems, Sir. Congratulations!

Charlie S thanks so much..interesting and well worth the time to read

BEWARE (is b.. thumbs up

Forgive me o, my dearest friend For pushing you to the corner or dead end You were taken to smoking And then to hashish and smacking