Forgive Me My Love Comments

for only this heart of mine is all I can offer you. after comparing you come at the end to the point........ i shall give you my heart dear..... very very nice, , , , , , , , , , in your simplicity lies the fineness. God bless u.

I just like the simplicity in your poems

hmmm.. heart is the greatest woman's possession. very nice poem...ichi ban arigato kudaimas

hmmm.. heart is the greatest woman's possession. very nice poem...ichi ban arigato kudaimas

I like how you used brevity and simplicity in your poem, getting the message across without voluminous words. Great write!