Saturday, October 4, 2008

Forgive Me, My Angel Comments

Rating: 3.2

Forgive me if i look at you and i'll lose my mind
Forgive me if i write a song for you
Forgive me if i count the stars at night and think about you
Forgive me if i wish that you'd be here with me
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mimzy sue
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Antonio Liao 03 November 2008

thats a very honest poem.... the wisdom behind the poet.... tells that life is not alone to live..... your such a very nice person.... it is reflected in your poem.... thank you my friend.... i love to read again and again your poem... God bless and good day

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Alexandra Gray 02 November 2008

Just wonderful, wonderful poem.I guess you don't have to be sorry, you just can't help it if your in love :)

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Alison Cassidy 25 October 2008

This wistful poem reminds me of Juliet's famous line: 'Parting is such sweet sorrow that I shall say goodbye till it be morrow.' You have a sweet, romantic heart that deserves to be embraced by her AnGel. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Jerry Hughes 24 October 2008

You're much more than 'just a human being' Mary, you're a compassionate, caring person and it's evident in your writing...

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Angeline Snowboy 19 October 2008

nicely written! =D love ur poems!

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Ivor Hogg 09 October 2008

Liked the sentiment but found the repetition a bit too much

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Howard Johnson 09 October 2008

A nice piece, enjoyed every word, Mimzy, thank you for sharing,

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9 Like it Very Beautiful Your a very good poet keep writing -Brie

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Shimon Weinroth 09 October 2008

well said nice poem cheers Shimon

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 09 October 2008

a touching poem thanks for sharing

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 October 2008

love still intense betiding by the gleams of beauty forgiveness pledges to the time and space by redemption.............wonderful expression of love by imagery, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 October 2008

oh mimzy tell me between love and he what's in the middle? your lovely poetry..............

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Mehedi Faysal 05 October 2008

great poem...so bold words..carry on...'mimzy sue' 10for it

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Reshma Ramesh 05 October 2008

wow.......very nice indeed

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