Forgive me if i look at you and i'll lose my mind
Forgive me if i write a song for you
Forgive me if i count the stars at night and think about you
Forgive me if i wish that you'd be here with me
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Just wonderful, wonderful poem.I guess you don't have to be sorry, you just can't help it if your in love :)
This wistful poem reminds me of Juliet's famous line: 'Parting is such sweet sorrow that I shall say goodbye till it be morrow.' You have a sweet, romantic heart that deserves to be embraced by her AnGel. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
You're much more than 'just a human being' Mary, you're a compassionate, caring person and it's evident in your writing...
A nice piece, enjoyed every word, Mimzy, thank you for sharing,
9 Like it Very Beautiful Your a very good poet keep writing -Brie
love still intense betiding by the gleams of beauty forgiveness pledges to the time and space by redemption.............wonderful expression of love by imagery, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing
oh mimzy tell me between love and he what's in the middle? your lovely poetry..............
thats a very honest poem.... the wisdom behind the poet.... tells that life is not alone to live..... your such a very nice person.... it is reflected in your poem.... thank you my friend.... i love to read again and again your poem... God bless and good day