Sunday, June 3, 2012

Forgive Me For Being So Good Comments

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Lord, forgive me for my pity
For the vagrant and the homeless.
I should have given them a home
Instead of indulging in my finer feelings.
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John Thorkild Ellison
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Valerie Dohren 16 June 2012

Great poem, actions speak louder than words, it isn't enough to think charitable thoughts, they have to be followed by action, and many of us don't do this.

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Elena Sandu 11 June 2012

No matter how much good one could try to do, there is always place for more. Such empty space, quilty of shoulders shrugging us to make. Great poem, I tried in vain to give it ten it won't work, sorry.Thank you for share.

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