Sunday, February 16, 2014

Forgive Me Comments

Rating: 4.9

I watched you as you climbed the hill,
Carrying that cross on your back;
Through it all, I suffered with you,
Watching your gray sky turn black
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Lora Colon
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V P Mahur 02 March 2014

Dear Sir This is a lovely poem but i cannot understand who is mentioned in it.

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Joseph Narusiewicz 22 February 2014

very nice and deep true poem

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Valerie Dohren 19 February 2014

Lovely Lora, very well written and rhymed. Enjoyed reading.

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David Lessard 19 February 2014

Sad and beautiful.

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Khairul Ahsan 18 February 2014

Whoever this beautiful, apologetic poem is addressed to, it touched me and I liked it. Both you and he are nice persons, Why should there be pain between the two, caused by either or both? ? A beautiful poem that deserves 10/10.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 17 February 2014

a love all the while reciprocated but recognized only after separation, a poignant dichotomy!

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Gajanan Mishra 16 February 2014

very good poem with its tortured smile, I like it.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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