I watched you as you climbed the hill,
Carrying that cross on your back;
Through it all, I suffered with you,
Watching your gray sky turn black
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Lovely Lora, very well written and rhymed. Enjoyed reading.
Whoever this beautiful, apologetic poem is addressed to, it touched me and I liked it. Both you and he are nice persons, Why should there be pain between the two, caused by either or both? ? A beautiful poem that deserves 10/10.
a love all the while reciprocated but recognized only after separation, a poignant dichotomy!
Dear Sir This is a lovely poem but i cannot understand who is mentioned in it.