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It will always be a beautiful poem, enjoyed after few years not in touch with your work_Soul

It seems I'm back to the romantic period of English literature.Lovely, Vipins.Great!

Hmm...very deep...heart wrung poem...with blend of Thou...thanks for sharing ~ niv...tenner PS Please mine Omni Pervading Mother and comment n

Truly magnificent write sahodhara.

Amazing! ! thanks for writing such a lovely poem.... Kudos

Masterpiece vipin! Hope i write somdthing like this someday

Arise, awake and be inspired by the rhythmic beats of your love's heart.Her soul has forgiven your regreting heart. Peach! 100% to Puthooran. But where is this Puthoor?

Wow! This swelled my heart to the brim. Thank you for sharing the love you have inside your heart with us.

A poem that dance like the Ballet of the Black Swan. Magnificently composed. I applause your write and hope this is not a finale. Keep up the dance and lead us into your dreams yet untold....Virginia

your for given even by god as you have written a very good poem

Lovely words being used and you are making the wish to do good sound so smooth.... Excellent poem! ! !

no words sir, hats off to u, , , , , really wonderfull

what a beautiful poem! i do hope you continue writing more for me and everyone else to read!

This is a beautiful poem with deep emotions within it. I quite adore the way you used Old English. Liked the style too, very Shakespearish.

This is a pure masterpiece Vipins very well structured and cleverly written. There's so much hidden beauty here as well. Definitely having this in my favourites.

wonderful poem Vipins, , , , i give you 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Fantastic expression! Excellent write.marks 10+

nice rhythm in your poem. nice compose. nice topic, nice poem. xlent.

This is most probably the most beautiful lovesong I've ever read! Every line my favorite! Thanks Vipins and I'm sorry that you first had to invite me, before reading your poems. I'm glad you did, my friend. Your poems just keep on getting better and more beautiful.