Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Forgive Me Comments

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Do, please do.
I did foolishly, so foolishly now I am ashamed I did it to you,
Please forgive me; I am still shocked, that I could hurt a good friend like you,
There must be something in me that must be tamed,
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Oluseyi Akinbami
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Kristina Carr 10 May 2011

Your plea for forgiveness is very vivid and emotional. I can see your struggle in your writing. I hope that the object of your writing will truly find you again and see the real you. Great work.

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Oluseyi Akinbami

Oluseyi Akinbami

Lagos, Nigeria
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