Forgive Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Sina.

A very creative composition! Keep it up!

The need for forgiveness is here powerfully presented. Such a universal poem with which we can all identify.

I like this a lot, especially the first four lines! ! Nice poem

Forgive is the most important element of life. Great poem.

Full of sins, aware and unaware, it's our brand, To act bad, to hide truth under sand. Full with emotins she weeps, Forgive me, forgive us, for what we have done, And we shouldn't, and for what we haven't done, and the final prayer God Almighty forgive us. such a penitent plea God will always listen to. thank you for this wonderful prayerful poem on forgiveness. thank you again tony

the feeling which makes me to be in blue is clear in last stanza, its determinism.love the deep emotions.

Wonderful, Sina. A pleasure to read. Thank you

nice, from the first word you can see emotion not only the words but also the tune of it. good job mate!

sparkling poem, and you are a genius, I loved all your poems, and thank you.

Great poem, nice flow, filled with raw emotion! .. I don't follow any religion... Yet I watch those who believe am glad, think of them as the lucky ones. I guess if there's a god, then we should only love him, never fear him (her, or it..) If we could live only in love, free of fear, the whole world would be different. Love your god dear friend, maybe you should never fear him.

The clothes of wolves are now wore by sheeps That's why I kill the nights by my sleeps repentance and ardent prayer...lovely read... blessed be

The things i love about this poem is the feeling you give in, it so original and the meaning is really cool..keep it up _Unwritten Soul

Very beautiful. I like it because it reminds me myself.

very beautifull.yes god is all around us.it reminds me one of Frogh Farokhzad's poems. I do not know if it is right to spend our lives behind the sins and forgiveness.but where we can hopelessly cling to is the God. I just wanna say absolutely they are right.only in this case.we must be ourselves. cheers Nader

Nice writting and deep meaning...i loved it.

so, rhythmic and heartwarming!

Powerful and deep! A well crafted and poignant write that clearly shows your great poetic talent and feelings! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Love and peace for always! Romeo-New York City

Exhaustive and phenomenal write here Sir