A beautiful dream you are,
Yet I know not what to do.
My heart is in a tumult.
I die for an answer.
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Beautiful poem, well written. 'Too beautiful to be forsaken forever' how amazing, beautiful work.
So nicely written. Full of emotion. Dreams are there to be realised. We cannot realise them all however. Keep on dreaming, I am sure reality will be on your side soon.
Nice poem, so real the words are well chose. And i love the setting....
very nice poem have great emotions and beautiful imagination, , nice work, , sry I did'ny find a rate more than 10++
Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal
Interesting psychological depth to a common experience. Promising :)