Friday, July 15, 2011

Forgetting My Dream Comments

Rating: 4.8

A beautiful dream you are,
Yet I know not what to do.
My heart is in a tumult.
I die for an answer.
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Emily Angel
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David Tremain 02 August 2011

Interesting psychological depth to a common experience. Promising :)

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Young Church Poetry 29 July 2011

Beautiful poem, well written. 'Too beautiful to be forsaken forever' how amazing, beautiful work.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 22 July 2011

A very elegant use of both light and shade. Well done.

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Hans Vr 22 July 2011

So nicely written. Full of emotion. Dreams are there to be realised. We cannot realise them all however. Keep on dreaming, I am sure reality will be on your side soon.

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Nice poem, so real the words are well chose. And i love the setting....

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Abdallah Gamal 16 July 2011

very nice poem have great emotions and beautiful imagination, , nice work, , sry I did'ny find a rate more than 10++

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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