Monday, July 28, 2008

Forgetting But Not Forgotten Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trite phrases galore
Memory plays tricks with time
Mirages that with the years
Made believe what was unreal.
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Rani Turton
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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

If I had thought I would have lived so long Or come to this sad sorry pass I guess I would have said-pass good lines. this was written very well. good job. Crystal

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Tom Balch 11 August 2008

A very well written piece, memory plays tricks because dreams change it. regards Tom 10/10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 August 2008

time is still on its wheel own way our raves up chases after the wild stream mirrage is still ahead when beguiled memory fluffs away as the sands of time and we are to tune our years as when attuned.............excellent flow of eloquence that reasons truth, ingeniously true, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Flora Gillingham 29 July 2008

You are right, Rani. Why do we run and run like hamsters on a wheel. We get nowhere. We should take time and enjoy where we are. We know it - so why don't we do it! ? Well said. Fx

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Rema Prasanna 28 July 2008

meditative write Rani.. either you walk close your eyes as nothing bothers you or walk straight head high fight win, lose and learn............it is difficult to forget and walk in between that is mind-human but wisdom notifies it is wise to forget... insightful one, a soothing comfort 10 Rema

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