Monday, October 15, 2012

Forgetiveness Comments

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Forgetivness has become the part of my life
conceals all despair and delusion of life
makes me to remember the days and incidence
of my evil days, makes me to forget
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ramesh rai
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Shahzia Batool 15 October 2012

In Forgetiveness i think you have coined your own term according to your theme...i am sure you don't have any Grammar issue...yes if you don't wish to carry on with this coinage, you can turn to forgetting or forgiveness...surely forgiveness is a great remedy...

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Unwritten Soul 15 October 2012

Closing last chapter and return to make a new lesson in your diary sound so precious in entire of your life, it's a peak of your lifetime, a climax of a beautiful things in many days as that's contain a precious thing for everyone to learn, to find and to gain..through dark we make an effort to see, not to blind, it was a nice write Ramesh! _Soul

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 October 2012

we need more energy and confidence to forgive people, but inside us, the hurt is always there to be alert always!

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