Tuesday, February 8, 2022

Forget You Not Comments

Rating: 4.5

I walked away that sunny day,
Never to see your face,
It's been one long eternity,
My life's so out of place,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Bharati Nayak 07 July 2025

In some moments we lose control of our emotions and take wrong decisions.Later we regret it. Your poem so beautifully captures your love and repentance!

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Many thanks Bharati : ) Much appreciated! x

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 February 2022

A touching poem, the regret lingering in the heart so heavily. Heartiest Congratulations for the POD. Most deserving Jayne....10

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Jayne Davies 10 February 2022

Your kind comment means a lot x Thank you!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 February 2022

I made the wrong decision, When I left you behind, Your eyes I see so clearly still, In dreams I hold you tight, I'll forever love you, ....thoroughly romantic though sad. Many congratulations! !

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Jayne Davies 10 February 2022

Thanks for you comment x

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David Wood 09 February 2022

Excellent poem of loves sweet memories, they are with you forever.

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Kolette Montague 09 February 2022

Wonderful Poem. We all have regrets from long ago.

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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2022

Nostalgic and insightful piece of poetry, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 February 2022

memories of him cannot let go Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2022

A poignant and touching poem of love. So well expressed with nice flow and rhythm.

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Jayne Davies 09 February 2022

Thanks for you lovely comment x

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 09 February 2022

sweet memories never die; it come back to re-enjoy as like as first joyous moment! - beautiful poem shared

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Jayne Davies 09 February 2022

Thank you everyone x I'm so honoured to have this poem chosen as POD x

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Nabakishore Dash 09 February 2022

Many many congratulations poet Mam for POD.

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Nabakishore Dash 09 February 2022

Regrets for wrong doing is the best penance.Heart touching lovely poem.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 08 February 2022

Sweet memories, happiest memories never die. Lovingly written the poem. I enjoyed

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Many thanks Mahtab : ) Much appreciated x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

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