Thursday, May 14, 2009

Forget The Pain Comments

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I see how my hands were bruised
I stepped and felt my feet calloused,
Bend these knees to ease the pain
Release me now unlock the chain.
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Luningning Minguez
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Meggie Gultiano 24 June 2009

i love the last line...Well penned

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Very nice poem, I love the last stanza most,10+

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