Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Forget The Curse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Goodbye rotating world, I am going to my creator.
You are neither my pal nor my liberator.
Tossed through the mad crowd I frown,
Long has been shunted like defeated crown.
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 February 2010

Sant. Tulsidas-ji said: when I came to this world smiled but I wept but Hey Lord make it when I’ll leave I’ll smile… Excellent way you’ve sculpted the adieu…touching…yet…should be borne in mind the wisdom in the poetry…thanks for sharing… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rania Hammoud 16 January 2010

It's really a great poem, i guess every 1 must hold on some time at these line as he reads them.They r worth to think of.great deal of imagination, love and humbleness towards teh creator.

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