Forget Not O Mind Comments
Ye miss O mind in thine mindless vain mirth
That every shade from a rainbow's palette
Ye paint with, brightening life's dreary state,
None else but by Heaven has been added.
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Such a fine poem, Aniruddha...............10++++++++++++++
Thank you Mr Bernard, your feedback is always encouraging, as is this 10+ rating (if my poem really deserves) . But not quite if it is only for encouraging me. You are welcome to give me your critical comments as well. Thank you indeed.
Thank you again for this feedback. But your poem page is not traceable. Any clue?
Thank you again, but your poems page remains untraceable. Any clue?
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8/5/2025 1:36:17 PM # 1.0.0
A brilliant sonnet (the rhyme pattern is deviated as already noted but poetic beauty is intact) . Liked the third quartet most and the couplet is very powerful! Appreciated this magnificent piece of poetry depicting sublime contents! (10)
Thank you Dr Dillip Swain for your kind remarks. It feels good when someone likes a poem.