Forget me not
My one time heart
And let the time slip away
-Fly away
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seems like its talking of the proverbial 'first love' but instead of that terminology you used 'one time heart' which is unique and gives me something else to think upon. well written.: -)
I like the title and it was repeated. That was big for this poem. It was also a little bit creative. Not much, but everything helps. It shows you pay attention and you care. GW62