Forget Me Not Comments

Thank you for reading my poem. Its a about a son who visits his parent's grave and experiences that finality of death.Your lovely critique is appreciated and also a true inspiration for me.

Powerfully, and beautifully sad, as the passion expressed in this work, holds no barriers...You sskillfully and eloquently inject the element of poetic pathos, and because so...the impact of your storyline hits its mark...Solid structural movement throughout...What more to say but, stellar crafting, and keep that pen pumping ~FjR~