Forget Me Not Comments

..the pleasing mien of you still haunts my eyes though I must stay away from where love lies... oh, God has made a flower very fair your petals are too shiny for a bloom... Real Loving Lines! Thanks for the Lines and expressions! Siddartha Montik!

Again, a good attempt at the set form, it follows the script precisely, and shows how difficult it can be to get it right. 'I felt how fair you be.' This phrase could only be acceptable in the mouth of a comedic peasant! What 'flies' make it hard to see, in the context of the poem?

well written, Nature's daily blossom expressed in Flowers, yes slowl revealings thru the dew of early mornings! yes for a 9!

I concur the ending is very strong and makes the good poem. Excellent work.

well done! I like it

Nice poem. Flowers are nature's short-lived but frolicking children which delight mankind a while by fluttering their multifarious hues

Very nicely done. The rythm is just slightly messed up in the couplet, since always is usually accented on the first syllable. Again, I like your similes. Yet it is deep enough to make me ponder what you mean.

Alluring and ominous...my two favorite words. I loved it :)

Simply amazing. Very serene....i love it :)

so why do you always forget what's due? am I so bad that I shall not find you? .....nice n to be remembered//////10

I'am very impressed by this poem being written by someone so young. You have done an excellent job. Keep up the good work. Lynn

A well expressed poem. Good poetic language, well done; D

wonderful poem. favorite lines: 'so why do you always forget what's due? am I so bad that I shall not find you? ' reallly does good to the poem. keeep writting! (:

Soon after reading such a wonderful poem, I have become paralyzed.... The name of the poem really affected me... A great masterpiece...

Very good poem. A pleasure to read, like music.

vely write with good idea..liked it..well done 10/10

every word is on its place. and together it`s a very fine poem that i liked a lot! smart, quite, but still romantic

you write like an old man here! wow... big boom improvement in wordings dear sir!

This is very good my friend and I love the form =) 10 from Merna: P ;) ! !

The best poem you've written yet! :) I love it! ! Thanx for the invite i'll go write some poems myself it's been a while!