Forget Me Comments

IF THE FLAMES OF LOVE HAD ONCE BEEN LIT, - IT IS DIFFICULT TO TOTALLY FORGET! MEMORIES REMAIN AND THOUGHTS BLOSSOMS IN THE SILENCE OF THE NIGHT - IN THE SUBCONSCIOUS MIND; - LOVE'S EMBERS FLICKER TO SHED WARMTH AGAIN! 10! -Raj

I felt your poignancy too Rani. Your poem is so effective I feel because of the repetition of forget me and the superb imagery. A pensive and beautiful poem. 10 Karin Anderson

Rani this is indeed a very poignant piece....leaves the reader thinking.....10+++++

This is a strong and pensive verse and the final few words are so very telling - - it leaves the reader with a heart that feels the poignancy of the composition. Rani this deserves more than ten..... 10 + + + from Fay.