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ouch! That was a little... well, we all have a few of those 'angry, mean' poems! lol. Words were nicely arranged though, makes the emotion behind it very clear.

wow, Chris, now who's dat? (hope it's not me though...lol.just kidding) .u showed raw diction there and it really showed the pain and grief the persona is going through.(hope it's not u, ryt?) .Many times, we teenagers rush into relationships with ur tender and feeble hearts get them squashed lyk watermelons! ! I think we really need to study the terrain before we venture into this dire issue.oh! and I almost forgot-nice write, Chris.dat was a harsh one!

There is an honesty and earthiness in here. I like the straight forward and direct language. Best Steve