Forget I Ever Existed Comments

Rachael, a very compelling read. I think it would be a bit impossible to for get you after reading this. Beautiful piece of writing. Thanks for sharing it. David

A melancholic gem, Rachael... very well done and impossible to 'forget'! Brian

Hey Rachael! That was a beautiful, disturbing poem. Compelling and well written. Never stop writing. Smiles N Hugs Willow: -)

Mmm... interesting and disturbing at the same time! This sends a very clear message - almost like a warning! Very strong words Rachael. HG: -) xx

This is a disturbingly clear depiction of a very negative, self destructive emotional state. An incredibly convincing piece of writing. And if it isn't representative of an actual experience then it's also quite an imaginative feat into the bargain. Either way, it hits home. Alice, hugs, xx

Great poem your words paint a picture to where I feel like I'm there with you keep up the great work

nicely done rachael.... i have so often felt the same way! excellent images, meter and rhyme - technically a +10. thanks for sharing