Friday, June 29, 2007

Forget Him Comments

Rating: 4.8

Forget his name
Forget his face
Forget his kiss
His warm embrace
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Xanadu Trevino
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Melvina Germain 01 July 2007

Excellent poem Andrea, sometimes this is easier said than done. I like the flow of our poem and very good rhyme also. The fact that the person may be very young would help for them to forget in time however, usually you don't forget you just live with it and learn from the experience and that's a good thing. We don't usually want to make the same mistake twice. All in all an enjoyable read, good thinking my dear.--Melvina--

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