Saturday, October 20, 2018

Forget And Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

It beats so fast
Like drum so hard
It may burst in pain
As it always strain
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Rini Shibu
fly
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2022

Readers would pay attention to your last couple of lines!

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Carl Roussell 31 October 2018

Don't let the stress get to you - A 10.

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Lamar Cole 20 October 2018

Great poem about forget and fly.

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Kostas Lagos 20 October 2018

Ready to spread my wings! Perfect 10!

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Susheela Shiju 20 October 2018

well penned dear Rini!

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 October 2018

Hi Rini, A life away from strife, stress is what everyone looks for. But do we find it?

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 October 2018

But it is very difficult sometimes to forget. That should be done though to have a good life. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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A fan 20 October 2018

They say stay in peace But still stress increase....so true! beautifully penned!

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Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2018

Forget everything and fly.Is it so easy dear poet? Nicely crafted poem.loved it.Thanks for sharing.

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