Forevermore Comments

I've undone my existence and offer you the play dough of my body and soul; give it the shape of your dreams and desires

well done, though I am unsure of absolutes, you make them sound desirable, lovely metaphors

That was a loving write from a sincere heart thanks Chris 10

this is such a lovely piece 10/10

sincere lovely wish...a poem very much pleasing to mind...

It sounds like there's a muse in your life, or perhaps you created one from imagination as I have done...lovely...Coach

Viola...Only you could convey such heart-felt beauty into eight magical lines. Kev.

I think it is great, how could I not give it a 10...

A very lovely (if not candy ass) piece. I loved it! !

Wonderfully romantic place to be Viola! I wish you great happiness. A stunning write, smiling at your good fortune, Tai