Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Forever Yours... Comments

Rating: ★4.0

You may put me down and call me names
But my love for you is a never ending flame
It won’t die, even if you mistreat me
I love you no matter what, don’t you see
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Andrew Bellon 25 May 2010

Sonnet form for this expression of love's exasperations is very fitting. I like the poem. The feeling is real and is not artificialized by overpressuring the form or diction. Keep it going. yrs, abellon

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Iron Panda 23™ 25 May 2010

i likes it! ! ! especially the last part (:

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Jesse Palma 25 May 2010

Not bad at all. I know what it feels like.

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