Forever You Comments

I’ll not miss you and your excellent poem. Always with a smiling ten++ dr.sakti. Please visit my page .Page no 3 [poem 49 I’M NO CELEB] and page 4 [poem 77, O’ YOU MY LUMINISCNT LIPS] or other poems ds

you did it again: -)

heartwrenching write of the pain and loss.....felt by your heart and ironical too that you can't heal it as a large part of it has been taken away by him! emotional 10+

filled with depth and passion. i loved this one... great work

tried to forget you But you would not go away I tried to confine you But you would not be caged I tried to deny you But you are a part of me................ true.love yet never forsakes its gleams unto even mortality more we go away from it yet reflects back in multiples whisperig gleams being more enlightened falling sway to mystery as captive soul even being befuddled redounds to glow, , it is a masterpiece impeccably curved in by art of love in dazzling colors of mist, wonderfully engraved in the rune of void by artistic florence of beauty across the falling dew by the night awaiting redemption by different faces of contradiction with varied sheds of metaphors and imagery, philosophy of mystical true love happens to decipher the code of reality where intellect by its amazing tools delves the irrevocable beauty of adherence of loving souls, luscious flow ingeniously in its superb way of unique genre swaddles across the blazing glaze of rainbow,10+++++, thanks for sharing

you should put to my boo........les and then it woudl be perfect... The poem is good....... i liked the involuntary tears...... sad, , , , , but good and sweet.