All the roses have bloomed
by the muddy road
The sun hid his face
And kept crying in sorrow
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Hi Asavri, This poem of love towards your grandfather moves one to tears... great write....
I cannot remember many poems that have moved me more than this beautiful piece. I'll put it in my list of favourites. You have great quality.
Lovely dedication and eloquent memorial to a granddad, whose glorious exit from earth into eternity has left an irreplaceable void in the hearts of loved ones. Beautiful rendition of words from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing my friend.
Thank you so much for the beautiful remarks and for reading my poem...! : -)
in love with ur poems... [3.. awesome poem.. keep it up :) AD.. :)
It's sad, but I know if your grandpa reads this he will enjoy every bit of it....outstanding work