Sunday, September 6, 2015

Forever We'll Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

All the roses have bloomed
by the muddy road
The sun hid his face
And kept crying in sorrow
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Duke Perry Abrokwa 13 June 2020

It's sad, but I know if your grandpa reads this he will enjoy every bit of it....outstanding work

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Neel patel 28 February 2020

Wow Keep it up Asavri.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2018

Hi Asavri, This poem of love towards your grandfather moves one to tears... great write....

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Asavri Dhillon 02 June 2018

Thank you Sir..: -)

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Tom Billsborough 15 September 2016

I cannot remember many poems that have moved me more than this beautiful piece. I'll put it in my list of favourites. You have great quality.

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Asavri Dhillon 24 September 2016

Oh thank you so much sir...

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Chinedu Dike 03 July 2016

Lovely dedication and eloquent memorial to a granddad, whose glorious exit from earth into eternity has left an irreplaceable void in the hearts of loved ones. Beautiful rendition of words from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing my friend.

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Asavri Dhillon 24 September 2016

Thank you so much for the beautiful remarks and for reading my poem...! : -)

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Fabrizio Frosini 03 February 2016

Hi Asavri! sent you a msg.. let me know..

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Asavri Dhillon 03 February 2016

thank you...

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Sanan S 16 December 2015

in love with ur poems... [3.. awesome poem.. keep it up :) AD.. :)

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Asavri Dhillon 16 December 2015

Thank you Sanan :)

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Asavri Dhillon

Asavri Dhillon

Chandigarh, India
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