Forever Time Comments

Beautiful line dear poetess: : : : Goodbye is a lie, Because heaven's door is open To the universe in the window in the sky, She will rejoice in forever time,

Your words from the heart are deeply inspirational and you bring hope to a very melancholic situation. Beautifully written Hazel!

Lost whispers of endearments ARE written in the sand and death is ultimate truth of life and after birth this process is definite. Wonderful presentation of this poem makes this amazing...10

Such a Beautiful Poem! I Really Loved it! God Bless You!

There is forever hope, always. Such beautiful words Dear Hazel and my heart is truly with you in this sadness. Your words as always are truly heartfelt. Thank you and bless you. x

sky is covered with clouds to rain and rain will washout clouds hope heals our sadness and sorrows

Even in the darkest moment of life the hope of emancipation of the soul falls as a ray of light dispelling all darkness. An excellent write.

Very descriptive and beautifully written.

A heartfelt piece of writing, Hazel. Sadness tinged with comforting hope. Wish I had that faith.

Goodbye is a lie, Because heaven's door is open To the universe in the window in the sky, She will rejoice in forever time, Beautiful lines of a nice poem....................10

A melancholic poem so nicely and attracively penned with hope of happy ending. Excellent phraseology. Thanks for sharing. ....10

A poem beginning in a sad note, but ending in hope and the trust in the eternal bliss that awaits one even after death! In the sweet prime of youth, to be strangled by the tentacles of cancer is so cruel.... but the victim never curses her fate but hopefully awaits to reach a land where birds sing and bells chime and every head is aureoled! Another great write!

Beautiful melancholic write with faith of heavenly joys.If the doors of this mortal life is closed for her then immortal door of heaven is opened for her. Love it much. Thanks for sharing. Regards.