Forever Ours. Comments

Ah! ! ! ! 'My love in dream I see you thee, hand in hand strolling beside the silver sea' - asif another marvelous write like always fay, the whole poem is beautiful but these lines i loved most...... There is a spacious airy Place forever ours. No-one can take away rare Love like we possess, hour.....bravo, bravo many 10'ssss for this marvelous piece rgds asif

A very splendid poem creeps in mind with a very soothing effect. Conservation of what we possess is really necessary for it would be fruitful for us forever....10

Very beautiful language here Fay...nice refreshment...enjoyed it very much.thanks regards shan

A very tenderly written poem...peaceful thoughts in the evening time of comforting love........10++ Sue

Wonderful romantic write Fay...10++++

Very nice, as if a dream through which a reader is passing! 10+