Forever My Dove Comments

VERY POETIC IMAGERY HAS BEEN CREATED HERE, BRILLIANT KESAV IT DESERVES 10

The tiny wings of your nascent dreams, I hear now, reach me out in haste

‘…The tiny wings of your nascent dreams, /I hear now… Brilliance [Unusual mental ability]…you’ve Sir…what is audiophonic becomes visual…and visuals become audiophonoc… [As here]… Yeah its poets have the wings imaginable and unimaginable and their beyond…to fly in fathomless canvas… 10+ [from heart] Ms. Nivedita UK

wonderful poem. so endearing.. feathure touching..

Let me have, my Dove, your feather touch Rachel Ann Butler

Wonderfully expressed romantic lines...crafted with inner pen...truly reflects your passionate feelings...Liked every bit of it.

A passionate and touching work of art, a superb poem of love... Best regards! *10*! ! Friend Thad

Your comment lines form a good poem, Cathy...i liked the transcending sentiments and the fragrance inside these lines...thanks a lot

If thy heart transcends distances, And revolves around in space, Take thee my arms… my love. In chimera we’ll tilt the farm; Where white doves dwell In the grape orchard Or in the valley of strawberry fields Let earth witness us The smiles within us The divinity we have Amity of a child ----------- CT Heart

Dear Easwaran Ji A beautiful work of art in words with a touch of aesthetic sensitivity. Greetings Satheesan Rangorath

A passionate verse stimulated by the valentine fever....its in the right measure to set the still feelings afloat! ! ! ! ! ! Fantastic...! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Kessav ''Cupid'' Easwaran...You have penned yourself one Valentine, that captures ''The Heart'' of the day, my friend! F j R 2009

Forever My Valentine... My heart’s innate passion sick eyes tonight Transcend distances in space; Seek you out in the fragrance ripe orchard, Loving you grow in my craze; The tiny wings of your nascent dreams, I hear now, reach me out in haste; Let me have, my Dove, your feather touch Feel on my aching shoulder blades! The copied parts are my favorite. perfect poem! ! !

a gush of love...... like the ganges falls on the head of Lord Shiv... so poetic...so powerful... keshavji...you are a word-engineer...poet...ha...ha.... do you like my word: 'poet: word-engineer'

Heartfelt this poem seems, and some pretty images. A massage by your loveris an excellent Valentine's gift!

A real and good presentation to the dreams. well penned transcend distance in space........

as the feathered dove touches your back, that is when you have to step back. and thank the lord up above for showing us what true love can be and how it sets your heart free. a ten

Oh this is sooo sweetly penned...Very nice... Bonnie

Sweet words for a loved one. Best wishes, Andrew

Lovely poem with great imagery; almost establishing live pictures before readers' eyes.