Thursday, July 4, 2013

Forever Makes Me Cry Comments

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I remember the first time you said I love you.
I remember the first time you were there for me.
I remember the first time you held me.
I remember the first time I wasn't scared.
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Ramesh Rai 25 July 2013

True love mostly makes a cry. beautiful expression of your sacred love.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2013

It's a beautiful poem, sincere expression of feelings as they were and as they are now. You're the one who broke my heart, You're the reason my world fell apart So please don’t say forever because forever makes me cry Very touchy.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 July 2013

O super love, my dear poet, congratulation, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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