Sunday, October 14, 2007

Forever Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I admire your beauty, as you rest in peaceful sleep
My love for you like a river, never ending and oh so deep
I live for your tender touch, just one kiss from one so divine
My love for you so immense, no words could ever define
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Patricia Gale 14 October 2007

Amazing.. haunting and so splendid a piece!

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Thad Wilk 14 October 2007

Poison! Superbly written poem! love it, gonna go read it again! ! ! ! A 10 (plus) ! ! ! ! Thad

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 14 October 2007

Wonderful stuff. Nice written with depth, insight and emotion.

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