Sunday, October 2, 2016

Forever Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silence is the comfort of the thought of you,
In a noisy crowd you talk in words that dance painting a splendid new view,
Music, a lifelong friend, a sweet soul like meditating in a church pew,
Cowboy films are at the core of your being, your roots of acres of farmland,
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Hazel Durham
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Rajesh Thankappan 29 October 2016

If a friend can give serenity and stillness to the mind, it would be like gained a universe of joy. Enjoyed it.

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Sekharan Pookkat 21 October 2016

silence catches cool and calm heart becomes heavy and hard eyes closes to embrace shadows and soul- a romantic creation haseel

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Amitava Sur 15 October 2016

It gives a lovely feeling in reading this poem. Love is like a blooming flower from it's bud. Gradially it emanates it's beauty all over and that is love. Thank you Hazel foe sharing it.

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Susan Williams 13 October 2016

So beautiful. An over used word but the beauty of this piece just overwhelmed me and I cannot think of another word that quite captures its essence. It's lovely- but more. It's fetching- -yes, but so much more. - - - - - - -Silence is the comfort of the thought of you - - - - - - -a sweet soul like meditating in a church pew, - - - - - - -Your blue, soft eyes merging into the light of each new day Shining as you hold my hand, - - - - - - -This night of moon and stars Shining your forever love across my universe - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I think I need resuscitation! ! ! The love in this poem is heart-stoppingly lovely, breath-takingly beautiful. A 10++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rajesh Thankappan 12 October 2016

How happy it surely is to behold one's true love and chart a course of love together. A beautiful write.

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Chandini Jaswal 11 October 2016

Silence is the comfort of the thought of you, In a noisy crowd you talk in words that dance painting a splendid new view, A beautiful starting. Wonderful cusp of emotions.

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Mizzy ........ 05 October 2016

There's a lovely comforting sense flowing through this....in the knowing that you've found your forever friend. Amazingly truthful romantic poetry! !

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Annette Aitken 04 October 2016

How romantic this one feels Hazel..it flows so gracefully...lovely work... Annette

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Mihaela Pirjol 04 October 2016

This is such a serene and uplifting poem! In the completeness of mutual love, finally, the lovers have found fulfillment and happiness. '' I float forever in the deepness of the pools of light in your eyes, '', it is the most exquisite and expressive line in the poem. A great, lovely poem!

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Chuy Amante 03 October 2016

this uncommon love comes from an uncommon lover. amazing may you be equally loved and blessed

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Unwritten Soul 03 October 2016

I treasure the new beautiful you, and the feeling and emotion you have poured here is like a flowing river from your heart...peaceful..love this write and i am happy for you Hazel :) Definitely life will get better day by day

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Valsa George 03 October 2016

Reading this, I have a lovely feeling. Your cheerfulness and sense of fulfillment are radiated into me through these beautiful lines Hazel!

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 October 2016

In the deepness! ! Nice work.

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