Friday, August 10, 2012

Forever Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your smile makes my heart race,
Your voice makes my knees shake,
Your eyes shine for all time,
Your love I want to make mine.
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Cece Chisolm
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Khairul Ahsan 07 July 2013

Wow! This is excellent! Your best poem, I think. So loving words! Keep writing. It's a joy to read poems like this. what's minnie witout mickey, what's piglet without pooh what's love without happiness, what's me without you. That sums it up well.

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