Thursday, June 5, 2008

Forever Love Comments

Rating: 2.5

With you not knowing I Loved you,
I let you love me.
With you not knowing you temped me,
I still temped you.
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Mike Gross
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Butch Decatoria 05 July 2019

Do you mean to say tempted or temper? In the 3rd & 4th lines, just thought to ask... nicely done. Quaintly profound. Thumbs up. Peace.

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Greenwolfe 1962 13 September 2008

I do not understand the 2. But I found this to be a creative piece and rather unique in its perspective on love. Quite the interesting write. GW62

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