Sunday, July 13, 2008

Forever Isn'T Long Comments

Rating: 4.8

Here I stand,
Crying in the rain.
Watching your tail-lights,
All I feel is pain.
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Jessica Beal
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Rachel Smailliw 21 July 2008

Wow, i like it mucho mucho!

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Bob Gibson 14 July 2008

An incredable write Jessica, we have all felt the pain

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Kiran Raza 13 July 2008

I love this poem. you brought it out to life. definetly A 10

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Beautiful write! .... <3Payton

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Marvin Brato 13 July 2008

Very passionate love poem, sad it did not work for you! Forever is long for two hearts in love, it only becomes short when either of the two falls out of it! A 10.

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