Thursday, September 24, 2009

Forever Into Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the dim glow of a candle
I discovered an unused key
The lock I've owned for years and years
Guarded by my own decree
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Jean Dament 24 September 2009

I loved this lovely poem with it's great flow & story. The last line is awesome. Thanks for sharing. Ravensong

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