Forever In The Dusk Comments

What a beautiful tribute for your father, Sandra. The imagery and the atmosphere are absolutely unique. Thank you for your poetry and the very happy New Year to you. Yelena M.

Amazing composition, lovely. Enjoyed and added 10.

What a wonderful and loving tribute, Sandra. May we all live with such elan and be remembered with such grace. Best, Don

dear sandra, you are real fine poet as your words tell. should be getting an award for your beautiful poems. would love to read how you tackle poems of other genres, apart from nature. love, john.

'Your courage burned like wildfires in your bones' what an incredible gift of a daughter to a father to produce such a line as this for all who are at home with English to partake of such a verbal feast. That whole last stanza: WOW! You never cease to amaze, delight and educate my soul. Bill Grace

Sandra, an amazing depiction... vibrant and bold. Brilliantly done! Brian

You have revealed a lot of love in a few lines and it flows both ways in your lovely poem.

Through tears at a second read, I believe this is the most touching poem of your's I have read so far. 'Forever in the Dusk' is a great title and an fine emotional dedication. Patrick

A lovely dedication for your dad. I love the title very much too! Preets

This compact and beautiful poem is a true tribute to your father - and to your own poetic sensiblility and perception - and to your love. An amazing and truly moving poem, an inspiration to all who quail before difficulties. The originality of the metaphors remove it from comparison.

i dont quite like the falling sun part. perhaps your life long sweetheart. just my two cent worth

If there every were words that could touch the soul then these would be among them Amazing The hauntingly beautiful, 'Forever In The Dusk' shall leave a real impression on the soul Love Duncan x

This is such a beautiful tribute to your father. What indelible memories he created for you. Thank you for sharing this. Esther

Dear sandra, A good poem with a good start! How I wished you had made it somewhat longer! I still think you could and would do it sometime later when your mood is ideal again. It is so wonderful to have good and exemplary parents.We also feel they must be in heaven already. With warm regards, Dr John Celes

Sandra what great thoughts you must hold for your Father, I hardly knew mine he died when I was six years of age, a poem to be cherrised forever beautiful words cheers Sylvie

Heartfelt and painted in lovely hues.

A simply beautiful tribute to your father, I loved every line of this. Warmest wishes, Justine

This is the most beautiful poem for a father, I have ever read! God bless you and your father, Sandra.10.

Your arms flung wide to catch the falling sun. What a glorious tribute to your illustrious father! You have taken him to the sky height in praising him for his courage and conviction. The best of my salutes goes to him.

A well presented tribute Sandra, grand images.