Monday, December 1, 2008

Forever In Pain Comments

Rating: 4.8

you told me you was with your girl friend
I found out she was only ten
why did you have her around all those dirty men
what you ain't settin no trend
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keturah bailey
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done with this site <3 15 December 2008

this piece expresses much pain and brings back memories from my own life...nice write, cant wait to read the rest of your poems and the ones to come...

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Leslie Ching 15 December 2008

I agree completely with the comments below...woahz... Leslie

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I feel so much pain in this poem you did awesome Krista

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Linda Winchell 01 December 2008

Feel the pain! God Bless, Linda

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