Saturday, April 8, 2017

Forever In Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

Forever in love
With a pair of eyes.
But Brown not blue
Like my Texas skies.
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Juan Olivarez
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Anil Kumar Panda 01 August 2018

'Forever in love On this road of life. With the Irish eyes Of my sweet wife.'...so nice. You revealed the suspense about the person in the last stanza. So nice. Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 23 October 2017

a love poem is usually not one i favor, but, what the heck.............i'll read it now. well, i 'hate' to say/type it, but.................to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Juan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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