Monday, August 14, 2017

Forever In A Day Comments

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From a distance I look at tomorrow and I see the promise of a better day.
The more tomorrow draws in, the more the promises of a better tomorrow seem fictional.
I ask myself a question but the answers are conflicting,
Is God to blame for all our suffering or Are we as humans to blame?
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MaliQ Honesty Quallaz Nyasha
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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 16 August 2017

Only if She knew and He knew that she was the devil in a red velvet dress and He was the lost Angel in possession of a stolen identity.I LIKE IT

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Absolom Nyasha 16 August 2017

good poem young bro keep it up one day it will happen you are getting there there is no place for you at the bottom go to the top man peace

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Cebo Soul 15 August 2017

eloquently written, I applaud.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Honesty. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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MaliQ Honesty Quallaz Nyasha

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