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How your words grace the page with aging gracefully. Hazel, you have revived old age. And this old man feels young again!

The world a paradise of nature's splendid sight, Lights up our faces in the darkness of the ghosts of the night, In a blind world we are the people who can see...age and experiences of life help us to see as you say. noble thoughts my dear poetess. a fine poem.. thank u. tony

The world a paradise of nature's splendid sight, yes, once al a stage almost all thought it especially at yougth, excellent line, thanks for sharing the poem with us, +++++++ 10

beautiful poem. in a blind worl we are the people who can see...

Beautifully penned! On one side, we rebel against the encircling gloom, but on the other, our hearts exult over the brightening light! So we are never lost! There are always forces to maintain the equilibrium!

Light for the future had lit in the past and free present to glow like sun. enjoy the calmness in the old age like the stars in the sky receiving the free energy from the sun which glows for ever.

Waves pound onto the beach of our hearts shore, The wind rages against the death of the light, - - - - - - - - - ] You do these wonderful things with images to advance your theme. This image is so passionate! ! ! And vibrant! Makes me want to go march and protest against something! ! ! Excellent writing, dear Hazel, excellent! !

Of times long ago to know we have been set free In ablind world we are the people who can see. In depth realisation of truth.Thanks for sharing such a nicely penned poem mam.

A light for the past and to be forever free, As we charge into the future, Like a well rooted surging tree, To live with love and the energy Of times long ago to know we have been set free In a blind world we are the people who can see.... nice theme. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

Love is set alight, In our troubled minds ...... Thanks for sharing this nice piece.