Forever Free Comments
On a salty night
with an evanescent mist
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Discovered/ read you for the first time today. In Forever Free, is the subject a mermaid? Is it a woman who is committing suicide by drowning? (or am I trying too hard here! ?) In any case, excellent writing!
I like to leave the reader guessing! Thank you so much for reading and I really appreciate the comments!
married to the ocean to be ever free...... wonderful portrayal of the inner need for freedom and love. thank you dear poetess
Love will not change, Me, love it has. Year after year, Year's have gone by. Even after, death touches my face. Love will live on, even After I'm gone.
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7/28/2025 1:33:17 AM # 1.0.0
very nice poem......forever free