Sunday, January 17, 2010

Forever Fall! ! Comments

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walking through my long lonely way
found out that my ambition was sold
in the darkness solitude stands bold
uncovering a new obstacle I can't unfold
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Aira Olayvar 18 January 2010

“growing wishes captured by despair” It usually happens to us… anyways, I do agree with our friends who has first given their comments… your poem is good.

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Romeo Della Valle 17 January 2010

Wow, what an excellent and well penned poem, you got talent my friend, I like your wording...keep it up! 10+++

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