“…accept me 
as your true friend 
in bondage 
till our lives fail…”
                
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CP - It would read differently to change 'apart' to 'a part'. Only it would not convey my meaning, which is to be separate. So I'm leaving it as 'apart'. ~ Sara
Wofley is right... how different it would read if it were 'a part'... opposed to 'apart'... so glad you have posted again... may I encourage more please.. aroha xx
I thought the last lines were the telling and revealing lines in this one. Don't be confused by the reference to love, this is about friendship sharing of a heart. This is another way of saying, I don't love you and I never will. GW62

 
                     
                
To me you always have been a friend. Love, Ted