Monday, July 28, 2008

Forever Bound Comments

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“…accept me
as your true friend
in bondage
till our lives fail…”
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Sara Coslett
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Ted Sheridan 27 March 2009

To me you always have been a friend. Love, Ted

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Sara Coslett 03 August 2008

CP - It would read differently to change 'apart' to 'a part'. Only it would not convey my meaning, which is to be separate. So I'm leaving it as 'apart'. ~ Sara

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Emancipation Planz 03 August 2008

Wofley is right... how different it would read if it were 'a part'... opposed to 'apart'... so glad you have posted again... may I encourage more please.. aroha xx

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Greenwolfe 1962 31 July 2008

I thought the last lines were the telling and revealing lines in this one. Don't be confused by the reference to love, this is about friendship sharing of a heart. This is another way of saying, I don't love you and I never will. GW62

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Ted Sheridan 28 July 2008

I'm very proud and happy to know you.

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