I wish morn would come
and sweep her into my arms
How sad is it closing
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my reply for the last two lines: pity that vessel wherein no flowers bloom where dryness stays, remains in gloom... anyway, nice write here... nice penning!
this is just... wow. i'm just.... wow. this is so.... wow. lolz. i need a new word. that is soo sweet and beautiful and and... I AM SO JEALOUS I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THIS! ! ! ! LOLZ! ! stay strong hun, luvz uzze lotz!
nicely done...my goshhhhh, , , at last u remember to post new ha...the title itself can tell the whole content of ur poem....very nice..add more, , , add more...add moreeeeeeeeeeeee...
Wow... This is a really really good poem I really like it