Monday, June 7, 2010

Forever Blue Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish morn would come
and sweep her into my arms
How sad is it closing
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Miranda Dodge 11 June 2010

Wow... This is a really really good poem I really like it

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Ency Bearis 11 June 2010

Impressive poem and a good metaphor, nice write.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 June 2010

my reply for the last two lines: pity that vessel wherein no flowers bloom where dryness stays, remains in gloom... anyway, nice write here... nice penning!

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this is just... wow. i'm just.... wow. this is so.... wow. lolz. i need a new word. that is soo sweet and beautiful and and... I AM SO JEALOUS I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THIS! ! ! ! LOLZ! ! stay strong hun, luvz uzze lotz!

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Lady Grace 08 June 2010

nicely done...my goshhhhh, , , at last u remember to post new ha...the title itself can tell the whole content of ur poem....very nice..add more, , , add more...add moreeeeeeeeeeeee...

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