Friday, September 19, 2008

Forever Blind Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you desire sun
In the burning night
You will unleash
a most terrible sight
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Harold D. Cecil
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Viola Grey 02 November 2008

this one is quite a treat....there is a sense of foreboding lying underneath...and it's great

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<font color=black>Nagourta 19 September 2008

Lovely rhyme scheme, oh my GOD it was a beaut! This reflects an inner journey defying the gods and societies of this world, oh, oh oh....so GOOD! GREAT! ! ! ! Ko-oonay shayraffknee, tahz sworraff ko-orzeh Keep up the AWESOME work! ! !

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