Like a phoenix I rise from the ashes of my dreams,
My mind, rejuvenates for what I have seen.
A beautiful world without sorrows and pains,
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great minds have great ways to understand the lessons life teaches.(Emphasis Mine)
rhyme like song...with a beat to go along...would be great
When mind is purged of all sense of guilt and sorrow, we feel quite light! In such a condition, one will be able to forgive all those who have hurt him! With this when healing is complete, one emerges new as a phoenix, seeing beauty and grace all around! A lovely write!
Not only love but I wish your poem to last forever and ever till eternity.
Only a beautiful soul could have written such a poem as this. I thank the universe for one such as you because you prove that it's possible.