Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Forever And Ever Till Eternity... Comments

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Like a phoenix I rise from the ashes of my dreams,
My mind, rejuvenates for what I have seen.

A beautiful world without sorrows and pains,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sara Militello 12 July 2017

Only a beautiful soul could have written such a poem as this. I thank the universe for one such as you because you prove that it's possible.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 12 February 2016

great minds have great ways to understand the lessons life teaches.(Emphasis Mine)

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Darren Jkoeryo 21 December 2015

Interesting poem, enjoyable man.

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Manonton Dalan 06 December 2015

rhyme like song...with a beat to go along...would be great

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Valsa George 22 September 2015

When mind is purged of all sense of guilt and sorrow, we feel quite light! In such a condition, one will be able to forgive all those who have hurt him! With this when healing is complete, one emerges new as a phoenix, seeing beauty and grace all around! A lovely write!

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T Rajan Evol 22 September 2015

Superb poem...Like Phoenix your imaginations grow.10

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Akhtar Jawad 22 September 2015

A very well wrote poem, wonderful.........................

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Sanjukta Nag 22 September 2015

Not only love but I wish your poem to last forever and ever till eternity.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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